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Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Nov 30, 2024 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Missing Snow Patrol

She frequently left questions behind her answers
so, I stopped asking them.

I don't know if she used the concert tickets I left for her,
the ones I purchased for us before we split,

but I know for sure she used a piece of my heart,
without question.

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Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Lavender

Lavender

7 months 3 weeks ago

Missing Snow Patrol

Hello, Michael,
This reminds me of a poem you wrote before, about a sweater.
An empty but heavy heartbreak - you've described this so well.
Thank you,
L