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Dec 13, 2024
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Your own worst enemy!
When night falls
and dark angels call.
Who will be there
to take that last fall?
Are you bound for hell
well you just can't tell.
Some would say
there's a different way.
Does anyone really understand?
The decisions you've made
may have gotten out of hand!
In the end you're your own man.
Living a dream
that you can't comprehend.
You've no one to turn to
in the end!
About This Poem
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