Neopoet

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem seems to be a celebration of a specific platform, Neopoet, and its role in fostering a community of poets. The rhyme scheme is consistent throughout, and the rhythm is generally maintained, which makes the poem pleasant to read.

However, there are a few areas where the poem could be improved. Firstly, the line "Making writing a less able to sway" is syntactically unclear. It might be beneficial to revise this line for clarity.

Secondly, the poem could benefit from more vivid and specific imagery. While it's understood that the poem is about a poetry website, it could be more engaging if it described the experience of using the site in more detail. For example, instead of saying "Words on a page are more than just ink", the poem could describe the transformation of a raw thought into a polished poem, or the feeling of seeing one's words published online.

Lastly, the poem could benefit from a more varied vocabulary. Many of the words used are quite common, and using more unique or unexpected words could make the poem more interesting and engaging.

Overall, the poem effectively communicates its message, but could be more engaging with some revisions.

Please send feedback about Neo (our computer generated critique system) to https://www.neopoet.com/contact

to encourage the members to write a poem.

I would suggest a couple of changes to make this a little smoother.

Try- "Here, in front of the members to read."

and - "Teaching and showing us all the way."

Maybe you will think of something better. ~ Geez.
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that in the near future, there will be more variations in the various forms of poetry. no one agrees with the A.I.'s interpretation of members poems all the time. There are times that I agree with some of the things that it says, and not others. We are glad to have you here Clentin, you are a valued member of the site. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! ~ Geez.
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