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After the quartet
After the quartet:
As one long note, bowed to thinning silence,
We politely held applause, watched these magicians
Who flout all laws of natural science,
And float above our quiet adulation.
We got home, drawn of emotion, that such
Profound things as these could be given
To a silence that filled an empty hall before,
Then put the radio on, in the want of more.
We listened to Chopin and the rain as ever
Poured, in this neck of wood, strummed, lapping
Ceaseless - almost, then came perceived calm,
I realized, of course, it was the audience clapping;
Matching the rain in it’s random pattern,
And indistinguishable from the downpour
After the last and finest thinning note
Had been lightly given, to rain, to listener
And all who adored, endured, held scores
By degrees we soared, then fell like sopranos,
From warm to cold, to cease,
In the freezing seethe that grips us
Heart-held , astonished after an old song
Had ebbed, loved, watched learned,
And left the audience cold, in space
Yet within, fired and in spite of all weather
Yearning to stay in that time, that flow, in place.
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