Summer Morning

Aah, wild flower,

we've nowhere else
we want to be
but here,

chatting with the butterfly.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: United States

Favorite Poets: I tend to read Ted Kooser, Jim Harrison, Billy Collins, Paul Simon, Robert Frost. I like minimalist poetry, and poems reflecting on nature and Mother Earth.

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Comments

Jackweb

6 months ago

WOW!

I just liked the poem's brevity and simplicity. It captured everything in a moment.

A style I should try to craft.
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,

Jackweb

6 months ago

WOW!

I just liked the poem's brevity and simplicity. It captured everything in a moment.

A style I should try to craft.
,
,

Lavender

6 months ago

Hello, Jackweb,

A fleeting thought here in mid-winter.
Thank you!
L
(I look forward to reading your poetry!)

Rula

6 months ago

Wow dear Lavender

What a crisp, breath-taking thought!
It speaks volumes for me
The best with my morning cup of coffee.
Thank you for sharing!

Lavender

6 months ago

Hello, Rula,

I am a fan of minimalist poetry, trying to be present, and "in the moment." I love sitting with thoughts like these.
Thank you, as always, for reading!
Lx