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Moms Day!
Holidays are quite the "breed"
promoting reasons to "toast" a day,
some of them we do not need
but, celebrate them...anyway.
This one, made for my dear Mom
shifts my memory into high gear,
if I remember right, when I am calm
I can remember every year!
She's been right there, everytime
fate's hurled at me, a curve,
we've celebrated time's, sublime
and times when I've lost my nerve.
Accompanied me, when I was, right
been there when I've been, wrong;
the former taught me to take things, light
the latter helped make me, strong.
She's been there for me, in the end
helped me sort through all the lies,
she has won my heart as my, Best Friend
some day, I hope to be as "wise"!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: For antoinette marie.....my dear Mom. Happy Mothers' Day!!!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
docmaverick
14 years 1 month ago
Sir Ian....
...I say, Id like to do jut that. How should I go about sending my "Mum poems" to you?
Maybe, I'll just post 'em.
thanx, for that one for the Queen Mum!
your friend,
docmaverick!!.