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Rula

Jan 16, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Journey to Pristine Shores

Though long the destination
and tiresome, I'll set my sails
to your shores, wishing the winds of hope
to bless and blow my sails.

I'll set my sails to bask in shores
pristine, to inhale
the whole Mediterranean breeze.

I'll set my sails
and dig for peace
in broken shells
on your shores.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: For Gaza with Love

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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6 months ago

Journey to Pristine Shores

Hello, Rula,
Prayerful, meditative, and full of sincere wishes for peace.
May love and peace come to be.
Lxxx

6 months ago

Appreciate it

Thank you dear Lavender.
Just a quick scribble full with raw feelings as war has stopped in Gaza (at least for the few coming days)
I can't thank you enough for sharing with me this precious moment my dear friend.

6 months ago

Hi Rula, your poem gave me

Hi Rula, your poem gave me images of the Mediterranean Sea. It is lovely in its message for hope. I liked the way you used "broken shells" for a metaphor. Well done, Ruby xxx :)

6 months ago

Hello dear Ruby

Thank you.
I'm thankful. Great to have me in this glimpse of hope.
I wish peace to prevail the whole world. Life has its enough of troubles.
Much appreciate your visit.