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I like the internal rhymes. I note how endless loop gets repeated and the very sparse punctuation enhances that feeling of circularity, Perhaps if you didn't capitalise the first letter of each line that would be more evident. It's appraisal, not aprisal.

This was well done. I, too, break the rules of poetry and art. I am not often successful in crafting meter or traditional works. I really like how you describe what the struggle within your mind feels like, how you describe the two sides pushing and pulling on a daily basis. Your language was descriptive and the emotion was felt and displayed. You really gave the reader a good feeling of what an endless loop feels like. Good job.