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Jan 19, 2025
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I'll Leave The Porch Light On For You
Oh, My Love.
You've gone astray
traveled far
and lost sight of me.
Blinded by anger
and guilt
unable to find your way
in the darkness of your mind
The distance you've put between us
feels too far to come back from
but when the fog clears
and you want to come home to my love
just look back...
I'll leave the porch light on for you.
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