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Jan 22, 2025
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I Miss You Until (I Survived Challenge)
I miss you
Until I remember
How your voice
Rattles my eardrums
I miss you
Until I remember
How the floor shakes
When you bound towards me
I miss you
Until I remember
How the holes in my wall
Came from your fist
I miss you
Until I remember
How you call me crazy
And psycho and weak
I miss you
Until I remember
How you said
I didn’t try hard enough
And I miss you
When I remember
This tattoo on my finger
Meant forever.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
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5 months ago
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