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Grace
When I first saw him
arms, especially the right one, nearly reaching his knees
long lashed large eyes gazing low in humility
he seemed from a different time
Flannel uniform draped over gangly frame
cap pushed back, a pleasant smile
comfortable as a well-worn shoe for an 11-year-old boy
a fit like a lifelong friend
Aromas of spit tobacco, green grass, dirt and sweat
hung in the dugout air
as he ambled over slowly
cleats crunching split sunflower shells
“How ya doin’ mister”
poured off his tongue like syrup
“Good”
was all I could muster
He reached around to the back pocket of his baggy pants
and extended a booklet
gray, red and yellow
“Here, you might enjoy this”
Entranced I barely gave it a glance
blurting “Thank you mister” as he moved away effortlessly
pausing briefly to turn and smile again
before disappearing into the clubhouse
Home I poured over those 96 pages again and again:
“Pitchin’ Man, ‘Satchel’ Paige’s own story”
as told to Hal Lebovitz
25 cents
Copyright 1949
indeed
he was from a different time
“My God!” came to mind
One of the greatest stars in baseball once
here a dozen years later, age 55 or so
with the nondescript Beavers in my hometown
still playing the game
Never did see him again in the flesh
but thrilled when I read he made the show one more time
three shutout innings for Kansas City
at the age of 59
“Three innin’s is just like an appetizer”
he said in Chapter 21
no doubt he could have gone more
if they’d let him
Though he’s long gone now
those innocent days call out often
burnished by passing time
oh to see him again
About This Poem
Last Few Words: In honor of Spring Training almost here, this is a recollection, true, of my encounter at the age of 11 with Satchell Paige, pitching for the Portland (Oregon) Beavers many years ago.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
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Lavender
1 month 4 weeks ago
Grace
Hello, Richard,
Don't know how I missed this beauty. What a tale to be told!
Pretty amazing!
Thank you!
L
Richard Milne
1 month 3 weeks ago
Thank you...
... for your kind words, Lavender. Best to you always and all ways.
Lavender
1 month 3 weeks ago
Thank you so much!
Same to you!
L