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Feb 16, 2025
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Losers
Alcohol’s for boozers
Boxing is for Bruisers
Choices are for choosers
Courts are for accusers
Drugs are for drug users
Hell is for abusers
Oceans are for cruisers
Parchment for perusers
Refuge for refusers
Poetry’s for losers
— Blue-eyed Bolla, Feb 16, 2025
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Last Few Words: for fun
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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neopoet
1 year 3 months ago
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Geezer
1 year 3 months ago
Was that...
the taunts of the bullies at school? ~ Geez.
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Obadiah Grey
1 year 3 months ago
Haa ha,, Why not ,,, ! Obi.
Haa ha,, Why not ,,, !
Obi.
Lavender
1 year 3 months ago
Losers
Hey, there!
How about, poetry's for musers? :)
L
Blue-eyed Bolla
1 year 3 months ago
Losers
Yeah, musers much better. We'll leave 'losers' for our enemies to use.
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