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(His name was) Worth
He came to work in the wintertime
and left before summer came
hard to believe he was with us
only a few short months
He shuffled in and out of our hearts
before we knew what happened
the craggy face lined from a million smiles
eyes that lit up like a kid at Christmas time
He was 52 but will always be younger in our minds
he loved the good things in life
spicy foods great music
a rebel with many causes
He would have loved to have been a buccaneer I think
slashing his cutlass through the air
rescuing beautiful maidens
but he couldn't have kept a straight face for it
If he came back for a minute we'd say to him
you went too soon
you didn't give enough of us a chance to love you
but of course we did
He was a professional in the best way
a good friend a kind man
the kind who wasn't afraid to cry
so he won't be offended or embarrassed if we cry for him
About This Poem
Last Few Words: An epitaph for a colleague who passed
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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5 months ago
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Lavender
5 months ago
(His Name Was) Worth
Hello, Richard,
My condolences. It sounds like this gentleman made such a beautiful impression on you and others in a very short time. You've written a remarkable tribute to him - a rebel with many causes. What a joy he must have been.
Thank you,
L
Richard Milne
5 months ago
Thank you Lavender
It's always great to get feedback. I appreciate that you took the time to read this. I pray that everything in your life is going well. Bless you!
Lavender
5 months ago
Thank you, Richard,
The same to you and yours.
L