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Amen
Amen to all men and women that birth the children off eternity, generations yet to come possible because of the countless
That have gone before in concession
Humanity has illuminated Earth, but hearts
Have turned cold respect seems all but dead except for the faithful, too many are
Hateful and greedy putting self first always
People killing for fame what a shame on society who give it to them through the media who ruled by the elite purposely done for power and sickening greed
I have lost my faith in humanity all the joy killers and the vanity as we desend into falsehood which is an insult to those who remain pure of heart the love of truth lost
Lost on the ears of the ignorant who couldn't care less about the person within arms reach, a leech sucking innocence from its prey, I remember times before
Long since gone when people cared.
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neopoet
4 months 1 week ago
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Candlewitch
4 months 1 week ago
Dear Enda,
I agree with the sentiments of this poem. my favorite line is:
I remember times before
Long since gone when people cared.
much love, Cat
ziggy
4 months ago
Many thanks for your comment,
ziggy
4 months ago
Many thanks for your comment,
ziggy
4 months ago
Hi
ziggy
4 months ago
Hi
Geezer
4 months 1 week ago
Yep...
I'm in agreement with Cat; she just said it before I did. ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
4 months 1 week ago
Amen
Hello, Ziggy,
"...a leech sucking innocence from its prey..."
Incredibly sad, and true. Strong language and emotion. Amen, indeed.
Thank you!
L
ziggy
4 months ago
Hi
Many thanks for your comment