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Feb 22, 2025
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Turn on the light
Out of rubble and of ashes
Can come a time of hope,
New imagined ways,
A better ways to cope.
In a world without borders,
without propaganda and fear,
Society without discrimination,
How we all would cheer.
Nothing that's ever worth it,
Came without a fight.
If we're pushing out darkness,
We need to turn on the light.
About This Poem
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