SEDATIVE GARDEN

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prevented me from giving this a two-thumbs up. I believe that this piece would read better like so:

Rain hoods, bathing in lances
of elf gold summer, splashes
her rich, hot body.

Combing the
wonderland of green shaped
leaves in a picturesque striking
fantasy; a glowing vision of
geometrical symmetry.

With beautiful
contours that flare, showing off her
balanced folds and dreamy drapes,
the spider chills after designing its
residence with silk thread cords and fibers,
in a labyrinth maze of complex
puzzles.

I have changed a couple of minor things here.

Of course, I do not have the insight or memories that make this uniquely yours,
so I may have misinterpreted a line here or there. ~ Geezer.
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are welcome. Rough, but certainly salvageable. I did get a clear picture of a spider in the garden. Fascinating creatures.
~ Geezer.
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