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Mar 03, 2025
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No turning back
We’re standing on the edge, no turning back,
The future’s in our hands, it’s a well-worn track.
The road’s been tough, but we’re making it rek,
With every step forward, we rise from the wreck.
Challenges come, but we’ll never feel the slack,
‘Cause with every move, there’s no turning back.
About This Poem
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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4 months 2 weeks ago
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Clentin
4 months 2 weeks ago
Liked your poem, short sweet,
Liked your poem, short sweet, to the point!
Ruby Lord
4 months 2 weeks ago
Hi Anna, your poem has weight
Hi Anna, your poem has weight and strength and flows well. The only thing I stumbled on was the word rek. I don't recognise the meaning behind it. Ruby xx
Lavender
4 months 1 week ago
No Turning Back
Hello, Anna,
You and your poetry continue to inspire.
Thank you!
L