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Mar 07, 2025
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Things That Don't Know Greed
The sun. Plenty of light for all to share,
although it may have some issues with shade.
Our dogs. Okay, maybe a little around treats.
Grief. It doesn't want more than is needed
to show how much love was there,
paid with a toll that can't be spent.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
4 months 2 weeks ago
Things That Don't Know Greed
Hello, Michael,
Always so much depth and human compassion, especially here. I might add that your poetry is also something that knows no greed - it gives freely to all of us. Very grounding.
Thank you,
L
Michael Anthony
4 months 1 week ago
Very kind L. Thank you for
Very kind L. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here - always appreciated.
Best