I am hateful

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This poem delves into themes of self-reflection and inner turmoil. The imagery of running out of petals and having rotten dandelions conveys a sense of decay and loss. The use of salty tears and the vivid description of knowing how pain and self-hurt taste add depth to the emotions being explored. Consider further developing the imagery and exploring different poetic devices to enhance the impact of your message. Additionally, focusing on refining the structure and flow of the poem could help strengthen its overall impact on the reader.

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let the second [tastes] go, and say:
I know self-hurt [is]
Acrid,
Self,
Pity.