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Apr 29, 2025
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Generational opinions
They say, “you are what you eat”, but they don’t mention how we’ve all been spoon fed by our parents, their parents to them and so forth.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Jsut a quote I came up with in a lit class
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 month 3 weeks ago
Neopoet AI - version 2.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Generational opinions" explores the idea of how beliefs and perspectives are passed down through generations, likening it to being spoon-fed. The metaphor of being spoon-fed by parents and ancestors effectively conveys the concept of inheriting opinions and values. However, to enhance the impact of the poem, consider delving deeper into the consequences or implications of this generational cycle. You could explore how this process shapes individuals' identities or influences societal norms. Additionally, refining the imagery and language used could create a more vivid and evocative portrayal of the theme. Overall, expanding on the theme and refining the poetic elements could strengthen the poem's message.
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Lavender
1 month 3 weeks ago
Generation Opinions
Hello, Zuella,
Very nice - so much is passed down through the generations. Both positive and negative. Did you share this quote with your Lit class? What was their reaction?
Thank you!
L