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May 11, 2025
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My Poetry
Poetry
Much more than lines or rhymes
Or words dictated by some standard form
It is what that is inside me, my thoughts, feelings
My own form
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 month 2 weeks ago
Neopoet AI (Premium) - version 3.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
Consider exploring more concrete imagery or specific examples to ground the abstract ideas presented. The phrase "thoughts, feelings" is broad; providing particular instances or vivid details could make the poem more engaging for readers. Additionally, the line "It is what that is inside me" contains awkward phrasing; revising for clarity and conciseness might strengthen the poem's impact. Finally, the title "My Poetry" is quite general; a more distinctive title could better reflect the poem's personal nature and unique perspective.
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Geezer
1 month 2 weeks ago
I have...
to agree with our resident AI here. it not enough that you decry our overlords the "mechs", you must make us want to feel those thoughts, see those memories being made. In order to do that, you must bring yourself out to us. Like the ones about your grandkids. ~ Geez.
Clentin
1 month 2 weeks ago
I was experimenting with the
I was experimenting with the Triquain form, 3, 6, 9, 12,3