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May 18, 2025
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Melt me
Liquify me
In peace
Tell me the pain is going to end
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 month 1 week ago
Neopoet AI - version 2.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
Your poem "Melt me" conveys a sense of vulnerability and a desire for relief from pain. The brevity of the poem adds to its impact, focusing on the core emotions of melting away and seeking peace. Consider expanding on the imagery and exploring the source of the pain to create a more vivid and immersive experience for the reader. Additionally, experimenting with different poetic devices such as metaphors or similes could enhance the depth of the poem.
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Leslie
1 month 1 week ago
Kowque
I'd like to figure that one out too!