Stab Me in the Back Again, My Love

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Consider exploring more specific imagery or metaphors to deepen the emotional resonance of the poem. The initial metaphor of knives and wounds is vivid, but it could be developed further by clarifying or expanding upon the emotional context behind the betrayal. Additionally, the phrase "the greater the love, the greater the pain" is a familiar sentiment; consider rephrasing or approaching this idea from a more unique or personal angle to strengthen originality. The final stanza effectively conveys the aftermath of emotional hurt, but you might enhance its impact by providing more concrete details or imagery to illustrate the process of healing and becoming whole again.

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Hello, BlueSkies,
So intriguing. This has a deeper, subtle message when reading a couple times. A shadow box - displaying these knives (heartbreaks) like a trophy of sorts, or a medal of survival. And the placement of the word "again" both in the title and that powerful last line. There is a feeling of forgiveness, or at least, the sensation of acceptance that the knives may be drawn again. I'll be back after your response.
Thank you!
L