My Last Love Poem (triquain)

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Consider examining the clarity and emotional resonance of the poem's central idea. The phrase "Not able to write what I'm feeling" suggests a paradox, as the poem itself expresses feeling. You might explore ways to deepen or clarify this tension. Additionally, the line "My thoughts are now printed on my funeral card" could benefit from more specificity or imagery to strengthen the emotional impact. Consider also the rhythm and pacing of the poem; the structure of a triquain typically emphasizes concise expression, so evaluate whether each word and phrase contributes effectively to the overall theme.

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and here is the answer.
I would just eliminate the [now] in the third line. ~ Geez.
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