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Jun 01, 2025
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Acceptance
Acceptance
makes everything
possible for me.
It brings with it
relaxation,
serenity,
and peace.
It leads to
power,
strength
and confidence.
It's a magical power
which revives me totally.
It is an emotion
driving me
on a daily basis.
As a result,
I decide,
I act,
I produce.
My spirit revives
and is given
a huge boost of energy.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I wrote in my journal about acceptance and how it both empowers and strengthens my resolve to act, just to get things done. This poem extends this idea, explaining it more fully.
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
neopoet
3 weeks 4 days ago
Neopoet AI - version 2.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Acceptance" beautifully captures the transformative power of embracing acceptance in one's life. The repetition of "Acceptance" at the beginning of each stanza emphasizes its importance and impact. The progression from feelings of relaxation and serenity to empowerment and confidence effectively conveys the positive outcomes of acceptance. The imagery of acceptance as a magical power that revives and energizes the spirit is particularly evocative. The poem effectively conveys a sense of personal growth and empowerment through acceptance. However, consider exploring more vivid and specific imagery to enhance the emotional depth of the poem and create a stronger connection with the reader. Additionally, paying attention to the rhythm and flow of the poem could further enhance its impact on the reader.
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Lavender
3 weeks 5 days ago
Acceptance
Much wisdom here - life gets more meaningful, and a little easier with acceptance. True, very empowering.
Thank you!
L
The Gogetter
3 weeks 4 days ago
A magic discovery for me Lavender
If I had known how much acceptance would bring me, I would have used its power and strength long ago. I guess you have to go through some dips and valleys before you understand that it is not weakness or even giving in. It is dealing with reality and how you will work through the problems and challenges that you will face. You have to have a few strands of grey hair before you realise this.