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Jun 10, 2025
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Highway 99 Revisited
Hitchhiking home with my best friend
in the late seventies, I think it was.
Armed with the assumption of immortality
that often accompanies youth,
we ignored the possibilities of danger.
In retrospect, behind our painted smiles,
there seemed to be a hint of desperation
as we stood on the shoulder of the passage.
I recall looking at the highway signs.
None of the harbingers emblazoned there
mentioned the different directions we were headed.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
2 weeks ago
Yes...
I did it too! I hitched rides right up until I was in my late thirties, never thought about the dangers.
I did run into a couple of scary characters, but didn't think much about it.
Funny how we don't consider the friendships and where they are going.
I would liked to have heard more about the relationships and what happened to them. ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony
1 week 6 days ago
Thanks Geez! I only hitched…
Thanks Geez! I only hitched a couple of times, but looking back I was lucky to do it unscathed (one guy was definitely DUI - yikes!). Surviving my youth sometimes seems to have been a minor miracle when I look back now.
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