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WRONGFUL STREETS
Lights flashing red blue
slicing the cool air and
treacherous streets,
patrol vehicle swims
by, searching shepherding
the people.
Spotlight splashes
a glowing cone
On an a African male
head in his buryed
hood his own hideaway
special man cave.
Patrol car wails to a
stop, a shape of a law
enforcement gets out
blinds his eyes and asks for
for his identity.
Before he knows it power,
control eats at him, the suspect
body starts jiving, convulsing
hit by a taser at 2am, just
because he didn't like
what the brother had
said.
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