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Jun 13, 2025
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Return of the Dark Angel.
Black wings outstretched, Hot eyes aglow
She floats among the drifting snow.
The angel all had thought was lost
Is back, now men must pay the cost.
A fiend is she with eyes of lust
That scorch the soul to blackened dust.
Tormented souls in anguish wail,
Their screams for mercy of no avail.
They try to flee but stand affixed
Her eyes burn deep with orders mixed
They try to know, to understand,
But in their depths they grasp the strand.
Never ever peace will tormented know
As when she wills she’ll come, then go,
Leave a soul in bondage trussed,
In agonies of wanton lust.
Lust that burns and tears apart
A screaming soul, a weeping heart.
Her laughter cruel as bodies waste
Across their backs the lash they taste.
Then she is flown, she leaves them there
For all to see the pain they bear.
Humiliated, shamed all senses lost
Splintered festering souls the final cost.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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