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Jul 04, 2025
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Let it be
Let it be
The arrival of the
New year
I hope we have a good year
Ahead of us
AIso I hope to accomplish my
Poetry writing
Also I hope
I will be no more sick
I am planning to stay
Healthy
In the new year
I have no idea if I
Will be able to do that
I am questioning that
AIso I am living now in
The future
I still don't know nothing
About my future
God please tell me about my future
Because I am dying to know
About my future
I hope not to make
Any mistakes in my
Future
That I had done in my
Past
I am afraid of
Making mistakes again
About This Poem
Last Few Words: That is a new poem Written by ALDO Kraas
Style/Type: Free verse
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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3 months ago
Neopoet AI (premium) [2025-04]
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:
This poem presents a straightforward meditation on hopes and anxieties for the new year, with a particular focus on health, personal growth, and uncertainty about the future. The language is direct and conversational, which creates an earnest and accessible tone. The repetition of phrases such as "I hope" and "I am" underscores the speaker's vulnerability and desire for reassurance.
Structurally, the poem employs short lines and frequent line breaks, which can create a sense of hesitation or fragmentation, mirroring the speaker's uncertainty. However, the lineation does not always serve a clear rhythmic or visual purpose, and at times it interrupts the flow of thought rather than enhancing it. Consider whether enjambment and line breaks can be used more intentionally to emphasize key moments or emotional shifts.
Thematically, the poem circles around the fear of repeating past mistakes and the longing for knowledge about the future. The direct address to God introduces a spiritual dimension, but this is not developed in depth. Expanding on this aspect could add complexity to the poem, allowing for a richer exploration of faith, fate, or existential questioning.
The poem could benefit from more concrete imagery or figurative language. Currently, it relies on abstract statements ("I hope to accomplish my / Poetry writing," "I am afraid of / Making mistakes again") without grounding the reader in specific experiences or sensory details. Introducing metaphor, simile, or vivid description would help the emotional stakes resonate more strongly.
There are several typographical inconsistencies, such as the use of "AIso" instead of "Also." If intentional, this could be clarified or developed further; if accidental, it should be corrected for clarity.
Overall, the poem articulates relatable concerns about the passage of time and personal growth. To deepen its impact, consider refining the structure, incorporating more concrete imagery, and exploring the spiritual or existential themes in greater detail.
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