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Clentin
Clentin
Jul 22, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sorrowful Moments

Depression
No illness more tragic
Than seeing my loved ones suffer so
Unable to bandage or quickly remove pain
A suffering deep within their hearts
Seeking God's help for them
Misery

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 months ago

Depression...

is often thought of as a malady of the mind. But I know it also involves the heart and spirit. I have had depression since I was a young teen. I am living with it successfully, with the help of medication and a loving husband. I like how you show compassion for those in your family who have this debilitating illness. Good work!

love, Cat