Civilities

Sitting in our backyard,
I observe the private lives of birds.

Are they friends, or have they just met?
What do they think of our new fountain?

They get along quite well.
Good manners all.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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