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08/25 Leaf Hunting

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Leafy Days

Leafy Days
Filled with bright Fall colors
Maple gold and yellow leaves appear
Mixed with green grass create a bright autumn blanket
Allowing us the option to choose
Making our hearts flutter
Flourishing

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Lavender

Lavender

1 month 1 week ago

Leafy Days

Hello, Clentin,

I feel the happiness here.  Very playful.

Thank you!

L

Geezer

Geezer

1 month 1 week ago

I could feel...

the brisk fall air and see the red and gold hues of the fluttering leaves as they fall to litter the green grass, excellent visuals. ~ Geez.

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