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Sep 10, 2025
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Bad Connection
Hot seat
Awaiting me
For the things I have done
A just punishment I deserve
Death Chair
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Cinquain form
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 weeks 6 days ago
Sometimes...
our own psyche makes for the harshest judgement. I think I see that here.
The minimalist attitude serves this one well. ~ Geez.
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Clentin
2 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you for comments and…
Thank you for comments and reading. Just thinking about some of the tragic news we now have!
Clentin
2 weeks 6 days ago
I see bad connection in two…
I see bad connection in two ways:
Connection between bad actions and consequences
And bad connection that results from great electric shock!