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Dec 06, 2025
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FI-FA-FOE-DUMB
there's an award for demented old men
it's becoming a placative trend
they can wear it with pride
bearing peace far and wide
a pacified, ass-i-fide friend!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: not sure of the spelling of assified...is it hyphenated as above, or like written here...
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
4 months 2 weeks ago
Great little...
ditty, I think you can leave it as is, you have made the word, spell it any way you like.