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Clear Thinking

“What if the nights gain on the days?”
“I hope the rain doesn't judge us too harshly.”
This is her way of thinking sometimes.

And it's what's kept me sane,
and here in the mornings.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Lavender

Lavender

4 months 1 week ago

Clear Thinking

Hello, Michael, 

I sense the simplicity of life in this. I tend to think similar thoughts - the wonderment of things beyond our control and how life can really only be lived in the present. 

Thank you,

L