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May 19, 2011
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Apathy, My Cross
she
with her mop bucket
sleeps on a floor
of dirt
a cardboard fridge box
dented cans
a candle
from the church
she mops
keeping demons at bay
mumbles a prayer
she can't understand
and I can't understand any of this
is she strong
surviving so long
or weak
for letting it all come down to
just this
she is an old lady
so I side with the angels
assuming Those Storied Ones
stay ever close
watching over
her
not me
I am just watching
questioning
why don't they do a better job
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brittle light
14 years 2 months ago
thanks...lots. I write
thanks...lots. I write something, hit the submit button...always a little apprehensive if anyone will be able to make sense of it...not that I'm complex or anything...just...unsure...so I am happy that you found something in it