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When Your Poems Find a Home
Each verse I pen and then disperse out into the universe and the unknown
They carry a little part of me with heart and soul that’s beyond flesh and bone
But they return with an echo from the voices of others who are just the same
From different corners of cyberspace with emotions carrying a similar flame
Thus, we come together at a crossroad of space and time with the same affinity
Sharing a passion for words that span realms and worlds like some fine divinity
And this place becomes a haven for the creations we come to share with others
Forming bonds amidst strangers that feel as if we’re long-lost sisters and brothers
Then we find ourselves walking through the halls and rooms of this virtual residence
Asking for help to improve our craft and hone our skills in the search for excellence
And then one day, after visiting many times it becomes very comfortable and inviting
There’s a rack with your name where to hang your writing hat, it feels really exciting
The journey of poets in the digital age can be a road that many wander and roam
But if you’re here you can hear your works cheered, when your poems find a home
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Rula
3 months 3 weeks ago
Wallyeoo
You've simply said what every poet here and the journey of each poem .A good tribute to Neopoet indeed.
Thank you for sharing!