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Jan 31, 2026
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4 DEMENTIA NUL
the genius in chief has a throne
where he diddles and fucks with his phone
it's dementia-nul chess
fiddle fucking finesse
a regressive disorder address!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Just a little bored here while my sails have a rest...probably housing spiders. Still working on internal rhyming...Cheers!
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Geezer
2 months 3 weeks ago
When you say it...
that way, it all makes perfect sense! I like the rapid-fire rhyme, the metaphorical tweets while in the throes of dementia. I love it! ~ Geez.
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