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Every Sunset With You
I would love to watch every sunset with you
Admiring the array of colors across the sky
Feeling the warmth of rays as they fade away
Appreciating the pretty clouds roll by
I could sit and watch every dusk by your side
Seeing that golden light caressing your skin
The value of the moment we spend together
While our hearts feel the depth and hope within
I long to be with you to see the sun go down
The emotion of time and tide all at once
The experience of seeing it in your eyes
Like a reflection of all my simple wants
I will hold your hand at the end of each day
Thankful for the time given through and through
But there’s no other way to celebrate so…
I would love to watch every sunset with you
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Rita
2 months 1 week ago
Enjoyed the poem. Love the…
Enjoyed the poem. Love the imagery and thought of enjoying the sunset .
Rita
Wallyroo92
1 month 3 weeks ago
Every Sunset with You
Thank you very much for your comment Rita.