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Flies
Nicky brought French bread, pate
and bars of chocolate. I carried my six-pack
of Stella and The Myth Of Sisyphus,
in case the conversation fell flat,
but which came in handy to swat
the seemingly Biblical swarm
of flies, on our food, our flesh
and my brand new fedora.
That’s very fitting, she said, almost
artistic, swatting those poor flies
with The Myth Of Sisyphus, like pushing
a rock uphill for ever and ever.
I took a swig of beer, then recommenced
the slaughter. So many flies! I should’ve come
with my whole Camus collection, The Outsider,
The Plague, The Fall, A Happy Death.
Very droll, she replied, did you know
that flies perform important functions?
Without flies there’d be no beer or chocolate
and the world would be teeming
with rubbish and dead bodies.
It’s looking like that already, I laughed,
we’ll need more flies to come along
and clear up this mess, then I’ll have to start
swatting them… and eventually, she added,
you’ll run out of beer and chocolate.
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Comments
Geezer
1 month 3 weeks ago
I think the name...
of this fable should be Cause and Effect or some such. I'm thinking the pollination of cocoa and hops might be an analogy for something that is renewable like Spring and picnics. Anyway, I like the scenario. ~ Geez.
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Lavender
1 month 3 weeks ago
Flies
Hello, Ray,
I can "hear" the narrator's voice in this. Wonderful dialogue and exchange. Lovely French references throughout. I suppose it's good to know that flies have a purpose and meaning in this life - especially if it leads to chocolate.
Thank you,
L
Ray Miller
1 month 3 weeks ago
Flies
Thanks both.