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Concatenations

Slipping into your jeans and putting on your shoes,
the ones you rescued from the rain last night.

Saying good morning to our dogs
as they stretch and anxiously hope
we’ll remember to feed them.

Urgently sharing stories about the dreams we had last night.
The ones we could remember, and those that are fleeting
before the details disappear.

All of these things are tethers,
keeping our home from drifting away.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Thank you, Umberto Eco, for teaching me a new word!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Lavender

Lavender

3 weeks 6 days ago

Concatenations

Hello, Michael!

A great new word!  "All of these things are tethers..."

Beautiful!

L