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FECKLESS FASCISTS

you're a lunatic country, I say
at a billion dollars a day
makes me wonder the cost
of those innocents lost
but you lot still believe it's okay
why not fluff up your dukes
and bomb them with nukes
y'all want it, we see how you play

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I'm presenting this as a limerick-ick, repeating the meter in lines 3,4and5 to create lines 6,7and8. Maybe not a thing, but it does appear to be a thing from where I stand. Any feedback is appreciated.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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