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Apr 08, 2026
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BLOOD OIL
they paid him to cave to demands
washing little kids' blood off their hands
"They gave me a gift."?!?!
it's the ultimate grift!
there's blood in the oil of Iran
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I'd like to use more internal rhyming, but I'm finding it a little slippery lately. Any help is appreciated!
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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