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Brown Study
A gentleman will clamber
upon her fifth floor balcony
vault a chaise longue
black suited on his dignity
and purposefully stride
into her brown study
She will feign to ignore him
and rather talk in asides
to the familiar at her shoulder
of succulent fruits and sultry jungles
thick lush furs of the frozen North
and the abrasion of falling water
Never ceasing to cook and sew
to knead and bake
to wind and weave and polish
her tales to perfection
His eyes may whisper imprecations
his tongue flick lightly
and thin manicured fingers
seek solace in petting
some unconsidered itch
She will talk in asides
to the familiar at her shoulder
she will not cease to cook and sew
and polish her tales to perfection
she will not cease to talk
Of figurines of porcelain
orchids and chrysanthemum
velvet and vermilion
the timbre of grand pianos
and the ubiquity of moss
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
2 weeks 1 day ago
Brown Study
Hello, Ray,
My interpretation takes me to the thoughts of a housewife back in the 50s.
I am curious...
Thank you!
L
Ray Miller
2 weeks ago
Brown Study
Hello Lavender. Not about a 50s housewife, though I can see where you're coming from. I wrote it as a kind of tribute/satire to a writer on another poetry forum long ago. It tries to ape her style.