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The Words That Didn't Break Us

Rewriting Memory

I knew it was going to be a really long day
But Cupid had already started working his shift
And though there was a team goal to achieve that day
It was a real surprise to be receiving this gift

And yet again, in my confusion I went along with it
When I was young, I’d try it if I had the chance
The day felt nice not knowing there was more to come
A serendipitous, unexpected romance

I remember that Spring night under a pale moon
The anticipation had been building all day long
We were young and innocent and full of dreams
The kind you can fill a book with poetry and song

But a day later, the forwardness was off putting
The unspoken words from the night before were crossed
Like mixed signals without a clear sense of purpose
A misunderstanding when the message got lost

Rewriting this would’ve taken us in a different path
We went our separate ways with not much to discuss
Later I reflected on that night with nostalgia
And how I said the words that didn’t break us

— Wallyroo92, Apr 19, 2026

About This Poem

Last Few Words: NaPoWriMo2026 Day 19

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: California, US, USA

Favorite Poets: Maya Angelou, William Carlos Williams, Pablo Neruda, Robert Frost, Edgar Allan Poe, Walt Whitman, Charles Bukowski, Alfredo Espino, Roque Dalton and several more.

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