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May 15, 2026
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Teething, 5/15/26
It's Jaws Clamp Down On
A Pure and Innocent Girl
Immediate End
Soaking the Floor with a Pool
Of Distinct Red Gloss
The Weekend Begins Today
— JoeyRoberts2028, May 15, 2026
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Style/Type: Free verse
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