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Jun 04, 2007
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You
You took my hand into your stronghold
as I lay sleeping on the couch late at night
You kissed my cheeks with your loving lips
as my body moved up and down from my short deep breaths
You covered me up with a warm blanket
as you wathched me shiver in the draft of an open window
You laid next to me that late night
like you sensed I needed you close to me
— Mistyone, Jun 04, 2007
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