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I'll forge ahead

while we’re trippin’

round the desert here

and dyin’ of thirst,

we must persevere …

 

p’raps some water will,

by magic, soon appear …

this weather’s too

extremely sere …

 

I’ll forge ahead

while you bring up the rear,

my precious darlin'

sweetheart dear

— barbsdad2003, Jun 29, 2007

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