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that's it!

she said she wants

a line with grit

that’s quite well writ.

 

well, there it is!

that’s it!

I’ve done my bit.

 

I hope that line’s

with her a hit.

 

with that remark,

I quit.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 09, 2007

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