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exit hole

water in a goldfish bowl,

when it’s able, at its base

 

will find an exit hole;

 

and then, of course,

quite soon there’ll be—

 

to those whose open

peery eyes just might see—

 

not a drop of water

in that very emptied bowl.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 10, 2007

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